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Sun Dream

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Dreams of you and dreams of I,
Were sailing through this dreamers head,
Adrift an ocean in the sky,
Of oranges and subtle reds,
Water-coloured cloudy thoughts,
Blended to a pastel teal,
And offered haven in their ports,
To any dreams I wished were real.

The beauty that this world displayed,
Would feed my ever hungry eyes,
Yet starved they stayed for all the days,
That you were absent from my side,
The Milky-Way above the palms,
The sunrise in a foreign land,
All did fall like shooting stars,
For longing of us hand in hand.

Your natural beauty ebbed and flowed,
Like waves upon my dreamy shore,
Receding tides that never slowed,
Were chased until my feet were sore,
And as the sun lay down to die,
Your face appeared a little while,
And lit my ever darkening sky,
With just a momentary smile.
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LyricsInLostLand's avatar
Wow. Just wow. This is so beautifully written, and the language used is fantatastic. My only improvement would be that its a bit sticky in some places, in that the alliteration/word play makes it slightly hard to grasp and read. Otherwise - amazing!